Chinese Seal Carving Vol.3

Here is the one I did today. Its a seal for my friend Joey which you may know her from the autodyne vendors 3......

She want something to do with tattoo so I used the word 刺[pierce].....and I think its look a bit plain so I modify the right part of the word to a crane and its does look better......

Well, I will have to say the design is ok, but the technique is bad.....I cant do a nice straight line and curve line....and i dont know what's missing really......but I will practice more and I hope I will find the missing key someday........